And with that, our epic tale comes to a conclusion regarding the bonding friendship between the ghoulish king of mischief and the monstrous mutation of a plant. I hope you all have had a great time reading what you've seen and I hope that, with your support, I can make another fanfic sometime soon!
The overall story is sweet, and kinda fits in the whole mario style of stories because it has a happy ending and a logical story curve. I would have liked some further explenations on how the boo's actually scare though.
For the whole story i'd like to see some semi-kiddy cartoon (because it fits the goofyness of Petey i think) drawings showing these kind of things to make it more appealing and more funny, because they look more funny then scary most of the time.
The story as a whole is, although maybe a tad long, nice and it would be cool to read the old story of other characters aswell!
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